Monday, June 22, 2009

Sentence corrections #2

1. While puffing nosily, he paused
2. Craig was now calm and at peace
3. Aunt Dorothy, tall and bony, was waiting at the front door with her own small daughter Diane.
4. There was a huge moulting stuffed mouse head which looked somehow carnivorous in the dining hall over the stone fire place that was never used.
5. Perhaps someone that lived there alone was an elderly gentlemen that had known her grandfather and who had visited the Parrs in London.

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